13 社会正能量与志愿者招募

2022年全国中考英语满分作文赏析

13 社会正能量与志愿者招募

NO.1

（2022·重庆·中考真题）

科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。

要求：

1. 80-120词；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

1. 起因，经过；

2. 结果，感悟；

3. ……

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【满分作文赏析】

       A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.

       I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.

From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.2 

（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。

（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。

（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。

（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。

（4）人们过来帮忙。

（5）你认为……

参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

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