08 建团百年与中国巨变

2022年全国中考英语满分作文赏析

08 建团百年与中国巨变

NO.1

（2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。

要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；

2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；

3.词数：80-100词。

How to Make Myself Better

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【满分作文赏析】

How to Make Myself Better

As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.

First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.

By doing these, I will make myself better and better.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文以“How to Make Myself Better”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。

2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·四川·乐山市教育科学研究所中考真题）在中国共产主义青年团成立100周年之际，你校将开展“如何成为一名优秀学生”的征文活动。为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并倡议越来越多的同学入团。内容包括：

1.爱国爱家，了解团史；

2.与人和睦相处，乐于助人；

3.努力学习，养成良好习惯；

4.锻炼身体，保持健康。

注意：

1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。

4.参考词汇：the Communist Youth League of China ( CYLC ) 中国共产主义青年团；anniversary n.周年纪念日

This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.

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【满分作文赏析】

This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.

First of all, it’s important to love our country and family. Thanks to them, we can live a happy life. Learning about the history of the Communist Youth League of China is necessary for us. Secondly, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. Especially, when people are in trouble, we should be ready to help them. In order to achieve our Chinese Dream, we should try our best to study hard and get good habits. Finally, we should keep healthy by exercising.

In a word, if we are strong, our country will be strong. So I hope more and more junior school students will join the Communist Youth League of China.

【解析】

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