中考英语 满分作文 02 初中生活回顾与高中生活展望

2022年全国中考英语满分作文赏析

02 初中生活回顾与高中生活展望

NO.1

（2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。

例如：1.一次难忘的旅行

2.一次难忘的比赛

3.一次难忘的志愿服务

……

要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；

2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：

3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…

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【满分作文赏析】

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.

Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.

What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·江苏泰州·中考真题）我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。

要点如下：

1.变化是什么？

2.变化过程是什么？

3.你从中得到了什么启发？

要求：

1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；

3.词数100左右。

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【满分作文赏析】

We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading. 

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time. 

Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

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